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Soulmates

I see her face when my eyes are closed
She lives in my heart and I in hers
My dark-haired beauty, my soulmate
A lifetime of love; given, accepted
Cherished beyond measure
A love so deep it creates its own space
Where none other dare intrude
A love story for the ages
But some stories are never written
Never put to the pen
For others to marvel and sigh over
To shine through the future as beacons
Of the truth of love
She died before we met
These are the great love stories never written
Lives lived out in the sorrow of the soul
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Hazelnut8299 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how this is written. So sad, yet so beautiful. :heart:
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drrocket Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
I thank you m'lady:bow: :icongwompplz:
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Hazelnut8299 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :heart:
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drrocket Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
I would hope that you would submit the full-size version of your avatar photo , you have a dazzlingly attractive smile:D:glomp:
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Hazelnut8299 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That would scare people. Hahaha!!! :huggle:
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drrocket Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
Methinks she doth protest too much;)
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Hazelnut8299 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol. :p
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drrocket Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
:tighthug:
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SammieTearDrop Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Sad yet beautiful, gave me chills
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drrocket Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
:D
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SalemCat Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh Darrel! I absolutely LOVE this, such beautiful sadness..so haunting! :love:
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drrocket Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
:tighthug:
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NathanNiine Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Is the poem about you? Cause I see you labeled it as fiction, but you're talking about a tragic romance?
I like the poem, I just want to know if there's a story behind it.
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drrocket Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
What you see is the barest of leakage through the cracks of my soul.
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NathanNiine Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
So then why label it as fiction?
Don't get me wrong, I understood the poem and I think it's good.
But I do think you might want to hold back on some of the emotional uses of words you're using in your reply to my comment. That's the kind of stuff emotional kids say.
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drrocket Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Given the structure of the submission categories on dA, there was no other place to put it.

Please note that it is prose rather than poetry.

Perhaps I am a kid at heart.
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